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It’s that time of year again
Where the cold freezes the tip of my nose
And my gloves
No matter how stylish
Never seem to keep my fingers
Frozen free
And my hot chocolate is always too hot to drink
But I get a cup anyways, thinking
It will warm me up while I stand
Outside in this
Frigid cold

It’s that time of year again
Where I take it slower
Than I normally do
And have an imagination
To realize everything
I’ve taken for granted

And I make a toast to myself
That I won’t take it for granted this time

It’s so quite when snow falls
The house can be full
Children and elders
On Christmas Eve
As it blizzards outside
But it is so quite
It is so still
We all lay here
Filled with love
This Christmas
This winter
Is going to be special


------
"If you get a feeling next time you see me
Do me a favor and let me know
'Cos it's hard to tell
It's hard to say
Oh well, okay"
Elliott Smith



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The following comments are for "This Christmas, This Winter"
by IcicleIcicle

Genial....
Dear,

You have kept up with your unique style of your enial say....nothing so much special is there, indeed; still it's special enough...

Merry Chrismas.

Regards,

Myth.

( Posted by: Myth [Member] On: December 25, 2006 )

thanx myth
thank you for the comment. its nice to hear from you :)
i've been m.i.a. lately...i've been slowly getting back into my writing though...

Happy New Year! since that's what's next!
-sophie

( Posted by: IcicleIcicle [Member] On: December 28, 2006 )

i just read your latest
poem and then i stumbled on this one from last christmas...i don't know how i missed it. this is some very fine work. keep it up!

john. john doe.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: May 23, 2007 )





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