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Zombie
I move without thought.
Muscles not steel
but cracked earth...
moving through it. think of body
like
an elastic doll,
move anywhere, fit anywhere, go anywhere
whatever, whoever's will.

Zombie
eyes blank like
-what am i
where am i
what is this?

I'm not sure which moment
this is. and
the moments inbetween...
of unimportance now.

Strength, endurance, determination
lack of will, wage slave
what names you choose
matter little.

Woman
from 25 hours of needles
to late hours
to "yes sir"
to bleaching chemicals. Water carrier
I seek to prove myself.

------
someday could be today...





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