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Hello Writers. This is XeroKraken. I\'m new here and I have put some work up. So far I\'ve got two posted and three more on the waiting list. I would like your comments and your opinions on my work so I can tell if I\'m doing a good job or not. So far all I\'ve done are lyrics. Its kind of hard cause you don\'t know how the songs would sound, but maybe someday you will. I\'m still within the learning process of my guitar and once I finish that I can start making a band. Who knows maybe I\'ll become part of a great band someday. I would like to hear from you all and to read your own work. See ya later.

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The following comments are for "Hello! I'm XeroKraken"
by XeroKraken

Hello, back-
best of luck, Derek-
and welcome!


( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: December 25, 2006 )

A new roaring voice on the Web block?
Welcome to the realm of the greatest authors on the Internet, Derek! I hope that you measure up to the high quality of work here (which I'm sure you will, considering as how you were apparently compelled to join).
If you would like some extra lyrics with which to play a tune on your guitar, check out my ever-expanding collection of poetry that I have posted up here. My cousin, who is a veteran guitar player, is doing the same thing. And if you would like any tips on writing poetry and lyrics, feel free to PM me. I'm a chamber of secrets and advice, and I like to give hints and tips to my fellow poets.
Other members here who have excellent poetry collections are Siah, wanda, Bran, and Majnuna, to name a few. Hopefully soon you'll be a veteran poet along with us. Just keep on writing; let it be a lifelong love of yours, as it is one of mine.

Nice to meet you,
ArsPoet2789ica, a. k. a. "Leopard Lady"

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: December 26, 2006 )

ArsPoet aka Leopard Lady
Id like to hear that story. i will look at your work. and maybe i might look into making some songs about them idk. Yeah ive been slacking off on practicing guitar because ive got no patience to sit and focus on that. i just want to be good at it already. but im trying harder now. Thanks for the support Thank X

( Posted by: XeroKraken [Member] On: December 26, 2006 )

U??? WELCOME HERE? f*ck that. jk jk lmao. naw derek I love u. I had fun hanging eith u lastnight.

( Posted by: pavlikogirl [Member] On: January 12, 2007 )

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