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Freezing, freezing (whispers)
Freezing, freezing
Freezing, freezing
Come on warm me up

Coldness is overcoming me
Its covering my feet
In fact my balls are turning blue
And its all because of you

I made you sad, I made you mad
I made you that way
You yelled at me and turned around
Your walking away,
But I知 forced to stay

Cause I知

Freezing, I知 freezing
I知 freezing when you walk away from me
Freezing, I知 freezing
I知 freezing and no ones gonna warm me up

I made you sad, you gave me a cold shoulder
And you wouldn稚 hesitate to give me another
You kept walking away from me
All this, I just couldn稚 believe
Your walking away
But I知 forced to stay

Cause I知

Freezing, I知 freezing
I知 freezing when you walk away from me
Freezing, I知 freezing
I知 freezing and no ones gonna warm me up

Come on baby, come a little closer
I need you to make me a little bit warmer
I gotta feel your body heat
So rub against me your so sweet


Burning, burning
Burning, burning (Whispers)
Burning, burning
I知 on fire


So days passed on by
And then you changed your mind
You knew that I wasn稚 bad
Although I can make you mad
You started warming up to me
And then finally I could see
Your starting to sway
And I知 giving way

Cause I知

Burning, I知 burning
I知 burning when make love with me
Burning, I知 burning
I知 burning when the bed starts to sway

-----------(Music solo)-------------



Freezing, Burning
These are the things that you make me feel
Freezing, Burning
I want to feel these things with you

Freezing, Burning
Freezing, Burning






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The following comments are for "Freezing/Burning"
by XeroKraken

freezin
lmao reminds me of that night...... lmao

( Posted by: pavlikogirl [Member] On: December 23, 2006 )

Boiling Emotion Soup
This one reminds me of the Ying-Yang Twins' "The Whisper Song", I guess because it sounds like a ballad of sorts that a guy would whisper into an enticing girl's ear. I really like how your poetry and lyrics truly stir up emotions beyond just referring or hinting to them.

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: December 26, 2006 )

pavlikogirl
i figured it would but ive had this song in my mind for years. you helped me with the ending though. i wanted it to go freezing to burning but you helped me make guidelines for the ending ILOVEU X

( Posted by: XeroKraken [Member] On: December 26, 2006 )

ArsPoet
In my mind i didnt plan it to be a ballad but then again you cant necessary listen to the song in my mind. so, thanks to some inspiration that ive met i picked up my guitar again and im startin from scratch so the world might be able to hear these songs. maybe with some comments from other readers and professional help in the future these might become really rockin songs. bye the way im into rock and roll and thats what i base my songs on but a ballad isn't a bad idea. girls go crazy for that sort of thing. ive started on one so maybe ill work harder on finishing one. Thanks X

( Posted by: XeroKraken [Member] On: December 26, 2006 )

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