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Nightmare sticks

and gasped for air
while Tawny owl, killing for fun,
screeches.

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The following comments are for "Foggy"
by NascentPawn

mind fog.
very sharp writing. filled with wonderful images. i've had to read it over again. well done.

john. john doe.

( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: December 17, 2006 )

Ditty
It's scratchy, it's itchy, a true little ditty.

It especially reminds me of the following memory maxim:

'Saucy Turtles Make Terrible Bath Mats Charming'

Keep writing,


Colin

( Posted by: colinbaker62 [Member] On: August 25, 2007 )





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