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Adultery turned deadly under the Crabapple tree
Preacher and choir girl met
on the abandoned farmland
Smell of death was in the wind

Everyone in the church knew of their tryst
Even their scorned spouses
WHO fired the four shots killing the amorous couple?
Her tongue and larynx missing (never again to sing sweet music)

Posed in death...her left hand on his knee
His right arm under her shoulder
His face covered by a white Panama hat
Her throat crawling with maggots ( when found three days later)

Remember DO NOT EAT
OF THE FORBIDDEN FRUT
(It may be a little TART)
You will surely DIE...


------
Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "!922 Halls-Mills Unsolved Murders or Thou Shall Not ADMIT Adultery"
by Nitz Kitty

Murders
Kacee
you brought a smile on my face. Yruely enjoyed this. Thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: December 17, 2006 )

forbidden fruit
Welcome back, Kacee. a salacious true crime classic, here... and the crab-apple tree's only fitting. much enjoyed. thanks for this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: December 17, 2006 )

murder
Thanks Wanda and Shannon,
I already see 2 mistakes I made.. sometimes when I type I don't hit a key hard enough and it doesn't show up...as in Fruit...and I mistakenly added an (s) to Hall...guess I was thinking of the cough drops...
The Crabapple tree gave me a flashback to Adam and Eve and the forbidden fruit (supposedly an apple)...the forbidden fruit here as you well know (because you are so very smart) is messing with someone elses spouse...and they did surely die...I'm pretty sure it was the preacher's wife and brothers who did the job...and if it was my husband...I know I'd be the one to cut the young lady's tongue and larynx out...my revenge...but in the end ...they all walked away ...Free...If you kill someone ...can you ever be truly free?
Nuff said...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: December 17, 2006 )

My fav rater
Thanks Chris...Merry Christmas...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: December 18, 2006 )

Lucie
Some people bring their own Hell into their lives...Things are supposed to go in this order...Get a divorce then mess around...If your choice is the other way around ...you bring disorder into your life and the cost is dear...Thanks Lucie, I enjoy your comments very much...I always like to remind everyone ...people who kill, always get caught...if not in this world...LOOK OUT...payback is a bitch...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: December 18, 2006 )





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