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Three sticks are bound
One is ample and slim
One is long and voluptuous
And one is revolting

The slim wiggles free
The voluptuous knocks revolting
Thus is freed
Revolting mopes around

Slim surpasses them both
Voluptuous takes pictures
Revolting writes a book

They thus become Madonna,
Marilyn Monroe and me.


------
Cynthia R. Yildirim

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