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The laughter in your heart
Would melt a melting pot
Would rise a sunken ship
Save a lady in distress
Lead the lost to find their way
Cause pain to go away

Your laughter
Is my laughter
Your heart, my heart
Two risen ships
Of ladies of lost
From laughter and pain
Let us unite these good things


------
Cynthia R. Yildirim

*~Love is the hidden element~*

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The following comments are for "The Laughter"
by LovesEssence

The Laughter
I like this alot. Keep it up. Thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: December 20, 2006 )

thanks
Thank you for the comment Wanda.

( Posted by: lovesessence [Member] On: December 25, 2006 )





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