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If you could only see not hear
If you could not hear your own thoughts
If you could not speak then what?
Would we be mute as the lilies, at least they thrash
with the wind,
We however would only stare, not able to think of
what we see,
Our thoughts nonexistent,
The sun comes up, yet we do not speak its name,
Nor know its name to speak
Would a higher realm, open for us?
Would we be able to communicate somehow, someway?
Not even to hum, to aah, to woo
To sense not, sight without feeling
As is this post-modern world
Blinded to themselves, for themselves
Blood, gore non effective
And there we are, there we sit and stare
Stare at the world, as it encloses around us
We post-modernist, we are this

What sorrow, could come if at once we awoke!

Cynthia R. Yildirim

*~Love is the hidden element~*

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