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Dad, you are a special gift to me,
On temporary loan from our Lord.
You taught me good from evil,
And instilled right from wrong.
You have a smile for everyone.
You are so happy with your life,
And those who know you feel it too.
When you close your eyes the last time,
I will miss you more than I can express.
I will grieve like any daughter would,
Who lost her loving handsome father.
I will miss those hugs and kisses
And daily calls to make sure Im ok.
But, I will rejoice through my faith,
Because I know well be together again,
When its my time to close my eyes.

Millard Irving Bill Lewis, Richmond, VA)

Paula Leslie (PAL)
"Give a little of yourself each day to someone in need and you will be rich in your heart."

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The following comments are for "WHEN YOU CLOSE YOUR EYES"
by PaulaAnne

When you close your eyes
Wonderful dedication...sometimes we don't see the special gifts God has given for us to share...We tend to take too much for granted...Lovely...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: December 19, 2006 )

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