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I thought that you liked me
I thought that this could be it
I knew that I liked you
And thought that you knew this too.

But this was not to be
It is an age-old story
Repeated forever in history
But the hurtís still fresh and new.

We never got together
Though I imagined that we would
We were led to believe you liked me
But no - friends is all weíd be.

It still hurts though
To see you with another girl
Well, can things still be the same?
It seems our friendshipís gone as well.

It would be hard to lose you
I donít know if Iíd cope
A good friend is important
Please donít destroy that hope.

Time will soon heal this pain
And I know that it could be worse
But still I wonder this
Did we ever have a chance?


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by Lajk24

I really liked this! The angst and romance intertwine perfectly! ^_^ More would be good... ::hint hint::

( Posted by: chibi-chan [Member] On: July 28, 2001 )

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