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You know how I feel
And you don't even try
To explain any reasoning
Do you see my heart braking?
Do you even fucking care?!
I could go the rest of my life
And never feel the way I feel
When I'm with you
I know I'm almost half your age
Age is just a number so society can limit us
Do you want to see the tears I've cried?
Do I mean that little to you?
That you can treat me like a Barbie
And stop playing as soon as something else captures your attention?
You mean everything to me
Do you care that I lay broken hearted
Just like the night you found me
Why can't you just try and see my pain?

------
Chell
Gimme something to believe in... yea yea


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