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Life is so hard sometimes I wish depressing
And disappointing event in life was a dream
So I could wake up and tell my family what I have dreamt
Then silently think about it throughout the day
Life takes you on various paths and sometimes
Leaves you tormented and stress after the journey
And when the everlasting sun rises and sets you donít
Know about tomorrow
So you live passive thinking how to resolve unknown conflicts
Then reminisce on the good days whenever they silently past
Asking, why couldnít life be like this? Having a good day everyday

J Allen

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