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Death has no remorse , death has no pity
To what or whose life has being expunged
Death is invisible , death is invincible
And walks continuous and mercilessly
Death is unpredictable , death is insatiable
Feared by everyone and anyone
Death is invariable , death is inevitable
And walks with the dark and the light
Death is peace , death is war
And takes you whenever and however
Without you even noticing hes a second away

J Allen

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by SugaBlaxx

When Death Gets the Thumbs Up
Death is your friend...
in the end...
unless you get a thumbs down

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 1, 2015 )

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