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Iíll always reminisce in the twinkle an eye
Then thunder my pillow with such lonely cry
I keep asking it is so soon
There is a dim sunset then the shining of the moon
My heart leaps then curdle like a snail
Followed by a whisper tale may justice prevail
I sometimes sit by the shore to hear the sea sing
But it then leaves my heart so sorrowful within
Sometimes I keep asking why
There is no happiness then sometimes sigh
Your voice echoes in my ear
Then trapped me in such pain I can no longer bear
I try to stand but my feet are no longer strong
I am stuttered I uttered wondering where did I went wrong

J Allen

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