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I think about you every day.
There’s not a day goes by.
I dream of when I held your hand,
The last minute you said goodbye.

Your mind was in another world.
To your children you couldn’t speak.
They called and said there’s no time left
Because you were too weak.

I came and saw you laying there.
Your hair wrapped in a bun.
I held your hand as you held mine.
Your work on earth was done.

I think about you every day.
The heritage you told with pride.
I dream of when I’ll hold your hand,
To accept my place at your side.

PAL
(WRITTEN & DEDICATED TO:
JULIA’NA SKROBACK, my great-grandma
Lord, thank you for the years you gave us.)


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Paula Leslie (PAL)
"Give a little of yourself each day to someone in need and you will be rich in your heart."


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The following comments are for "I THINK ABOUT YOU EVERY DAY"
by PaulaAnne

ggma
I know the difficulty of saying goodbye to someone apparently already gone. I share your sorrow.

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: December 26, 2006 )





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