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Journey with the river of life
the joy of eternal flowing
through universe after universe
the light a glorious glowing

Pure conscious being as soul
beauty 'yond the perfect splendour
expanding as infinity
pure heart it does so render

Spirit river speaking truth
ancient knowledge so returned
knowing all as all in time
such a moment my soul has yearned

Blissful being, transformed mind
waiting not the evermore
full expansion light of life
cosmic ecstasy of awe

Return to now forever been
love and light of perfect being
released to flow in soul's full beauty
with life's river ever freeing

Soul within the central sun
phoenix flame is rising high
so my soul united fully
with the One with whom I fly

------
Love and light
Elizabeth

Humility is rare because to have it you have to want nothing, yet when you have it you get everything.


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The following comments are for "THE RIVER OF LIFE"
by ElizabethAFeisst

The River Of LIfe
This is really good. I love the last stanza.
thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: December 10, 2006 )

Wanda
Many thanks for your kind comment...

( Posted by: ElizabethAFeisst [Member] On: December 10, 2006 )





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