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A perfect idea, immaculate conception
purely conceived, gestated then birthed
growing into full bloom as do trees and flowers
renewing, regenerating over and over;
so too all life conceives itself -
a process so pure, so perfectly ordered
so immaculately conceived

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Love and light
Elizabeth

Humility is rare because to have it you have to want nothing, yet when you have it you get everything.


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The following comments are for "IMMACULATE CONCEPTION"
by ElizabethAFeisst

Immaculate Conception
Of course this also applies to an idea in itself and could be seen as the birthplace of everything?

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: December 30, 2006 )

Ivor
I feel that is exactly what the poem is all about.... many thanks for your kind comment
Elizabeth

( Posted by: ElizabethAFeisst [Member] On: December 30, 2006 )

The other side of the coin.
The tragedy is that the magic of birth...immaculately conceived, is completely distorted by some of us as we age and do our best to destroy ourselves and others in the process.

Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could retain that sense of beauty and innocence forever!

Happy New Year Elizabeth, and may God comfort you at this time.

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: December 30, 2006 )

Bea
I am sure that innocence and beauty is not far from the hearts and minds and souls of us all..all it takes is a bit of cleansing and pruning to allow the regrowth/rebirth of our divinity to shine through.

So Be It... and Happy New Year to you Bea..

Love Elizabethxx

( Posted by: ElizabethAFeisst [Member] On: December 30, 2006 )





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