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*haiku form*

Sweet caramel ice,
her skin, soft cotton and silk,
is within my grasp

a teased wind blows by,
her long hair a sweet goodbye
before the lights dim

Each moment is bliss,
a cliche kiss, softer sounds,
and the lights dim more

Sweet caramel eyes
closed with joy, a warmer touch
teases the cotton skin

Each second is wet,
like a stream of sweet water
that drenches the soul.

*Poem form*

Sweet caramel ice,
her skin,
soft cotton and silk,
is within my grasp.

Each moment is bliss,
a cliche kiss,
softer sounds,
and the lights dim more

Sweet caramel eyes
closed with joy
a warmer touch
teases the cotton skin

Each second is wet,
like a stream
of sweet water
that drenches the soul.


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Art is addicting, an addict am I,
truth is I, the truth am I, the truth a lie!


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