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It is early,blurred as eyes glazed over. Face red, adrenalin pumping; his arms went out from his sides as he clenched his ring-encrusted fingers. A fighter I thought, satisfied at a good result. He stood and marched towards the dentistís room. ĎExcuse me sir, you canít go in there. Itís not your turn yetí the receptionist said. She was an angry patient. Intrigued I leaned forward attentively.

ĎShit itís that dentistí I said aloud. He didnít want to press charges, he explained, as the patient was entitled to be annoyed about budget cuts so he didnít want to make the situation worse by involving the police but thought he should highlight the patientsí problems. The camera panned.

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