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That's Johnny behind my back
he's on the track of the smack
For the dough,
for the blow, for the go
To bake and shake and fake the stake,
candles for your homeless make

Take your blindeye back where it was
-another giraffe on the walls
And the feeling it stains
ahead of the games
Brings us back to the days
where we lived for the chase

Fed by the shames
of glitzery blitzery dames,
fitting tomorrows attention

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The following comments are for "Grasp the Wasp"
by DrKilldare

Wasp Grasping
Not up to speed with your representations here..Title caught eye, as maternal grandfather would hold wasps in hand, then release them...

Enjoyed read.

Bibbing in Babylon,

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 17, 2006 )

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