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Go into your garden
and sow some perfect seeds
water all your flowers
and pull away your weeds

Beautifully simple really
the principle of life
eternal soul creating
through thoughts bereft of strife

Carefully nurture goodness
and love it into being
this simple garden ethic is
so worthy for the seeing

Beautifully simple really
is life's amazing gift
of love that lives in all of us
its beauty gives uplift

Such a wonder beauty
its focus lights one's flame
soul desires to bring to view
the joy of love proclaimed

Beautifully simple really
now time to realise
the Eden of such beauty
a garden paradise

Love and light

Humility is rare because to have it you have to want nothing, yet when you have it you get everything.

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The following comments are for "BEAUTIFULLY SIMPLE REALLY"
by ElizabethAFeisst

Garden of Life
This poem is 'Beautifully Simple' itself.

We should all tend our garden of life carefully...once it dies, we can never resurrect


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: December 5, 2006 )

Yes you are correct of course and it is really so beautifully simple, life, yet we tend to make it so complicated.

( Posted by: ElizabethAFeisst [Member] On: December 5, 2006 )

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