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Merlin my friend it is so good to see you
I've been waiting awhile; now at last
we're together to enjoy such a fabulous ride
of a lifetime away from the past

For into the presence your plan is to take me
for there one does find peace and joy
and love everlasting of paradise type
and laughter and lightness - oh boy!!

With child-like innocence together exploring
the newness of all the surrounds
within me there's something which deeply is stirring
something so deeply profound

A love that's so deep like a mem'ry renewed
from far ancient times long ago
it's surfacing quick like a pure ocean wave
to pour out as the lava does flow

Stunned and in awe and with wide-eyed amazement
my heart feels the love everywhere
such Merlin-like magic I see all around me
such beauty my heart wants to share

O Merlin I thank you for bringing me here
to the presence of Now where all glows
where the sun never sets and skies are so blue
and my heart like my cup overflows

Love and light

Humility is rare because to have it you have to want nothing, yet when you have it you get everything.

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The following comments are for "A JOURNEY WITH MERLIN"
by ElizabethAFeisst

Thank you for your kind comments... yes light of heart and laughter do help make the journey of life so much more enjoyable and worthwhile...

( Posted by: ElizabethAFeisst [Member] On: December 5, 2006 )

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