I agree with previous post. Good sense of the hyper caffeine rush. But I got the feeling that the last line referred to something that I must have missed. It jarred for me.
Posted by: nascentpawn [Member] On: December 5, 2006
Thanks for reading and commenting. The poem was just meant to be an easy read, but maybe it became too easy. Think meaning is obvious in the last line, but we cannot agree all the time(and that's good). thx.
Posted by: DrKilldare [Member] On: December 11, 2006
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