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What is this? This place that you call home is nothing more than a prision barred and locked You are nothing here Nothing but a muted scream crying for attention never to be heard What is this? This thing you call yourself rotting on the floor a pile of flesh You are nothing here Nothing but a pile of dust being swept way never to return What is this? This is Hell.

DJ '08

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