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Oh the things that ties us
To this earth

Things of beauty,
Love and birth

Things that keep us going
Day to day

Why without them we would
Just float away.


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by Charmr

good to be reminded of the fundamental necessity of beauty. enjoyed this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 26, 2006 )

Though, there may be something valuable in the floating, too! ;)

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: November 29, 2006 )

Bob,Lucie,Viper and AMG
Thanks so much for the comments. It sure good to be back here, even though it's only part-time for now... Bob, it is also nice to know I still have my bones...AMG, first the fundamental and all else follows...Lucie, always there for me since the beginning and always appreciated...Viper, floating is good,I'd rather be floating right now, OK anytime....Romay

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: December 7, 2006 )

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