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"Daddy's Girl No More"

Daddy stabs her heart
Wounded souls cry tears of blood
Mama kills the pain

Raven


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by ravenblack

RAVEN!! I"M NOT LOST

Before I go on I want to comment on your short and precise painfully sweet piece, boy do I relate...it's my daily litany too.

If the FBI wanted to find me I would be the easiest humanoid to find, I am all over the net. Anyway, left you a pm don't want to make too much public.

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: May 6, 2007 )





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