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cold november gust
rattles naked maple branch
at ground the last leaf




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by quill

last leaf
there's just something enormously satisfying about the line "rattles naked maple branch", I'm not sure what, there just is. Pleasing haiku, thanks for this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 25, 2006 )

thanks
...pleased that you like it.

Michael

( Posted by: quill [Member] On: November 25, 2006 )

Direct
Simple and satisfying.

( Posted by: viper9 [Member] On: November 29, 2006 )





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