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cloud creeps across moon
night whispers it's mysteries
concealed in darkness

The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

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The following comments are for "night fright"
by ivordavies

night fright
and night's mysteries cover a multitude of sins... creepy, with sense of suspence, not giving too much away and open to imagination, as good horror should be, and good haiku too

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 24, 2006 )

I like it....
I Like It... Did this come around Halloween time?

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: November 25, 2006 )

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