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This poem also was inspired by a person.
Through the comfort of our private sips
Of a life the other didnít know, we became close

Yeah, you could call it a shrinking gap

One day we just laughed, and another day
We kissed inside a perfect circle

No matter how bad it gets just keep on walking. You'll get there eventually, it may not be what you thought, but at least you will be alive.

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The following comments are for "Inside a perfect circle"
by thenightcalls

Inside a perfect circle
Very well done. Thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: November 20, 2006 )

perfect circle
Brief but beautiful. Those few well chosen words access the essence of the moment with clarity. thank you for this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 20, 2006 )

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