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A DREAM LIKE AN IMPROVISE WORK
What a nightmare I had last night, I found myself packed knapsack that cost me over 50 dollars and reentered a ghost house painted in biscuit I used to enter before, Inside my knapsack there is a bottle of hectoliter of juice lest I may drought of water
As far as we know, nothing is serviceable inside ghost house except terror, and there is no salute here from any thing.
All of a sudden, I saw a reptile-like vampire who humped his shoulders and drove a tractor towards me as if he would like to plow me, on seeing that, I scrubbed my eyes and tried to do my best to escape, but then I fainted, his figure evaporate
Then I waked up, in semiconscious statue, his figure evaporated, on the same time I felt wilted and looks like a nomad.
I am not steeping in investigating dream now. Hope to find something new.




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