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In the Wake of Rain
by Myth (Member) - published: November 17, 2006
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Category - Poetry
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First it was raining.
Now it’s not,
I can’t find the moment
It stopped raining.
And see that for the miracle it is –
Here are two handfuls of words
Let us sit together
And feel,
The world crack open –
When joy is no name,
But a presence.



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by Myth

In the Wake of Rain
amazing depth and breadth to this. wonderful exercise in less is more. highly resonant piece.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 18, 2006 )

Myth!
Happy having discovered you because of your comment in the write off! This poem makes me remember one of my favorite novelist's books: Dean Koontz's In the Corner of His Eye, where there's a part there that's like "I can’t find the moment/It stopped raining".

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: December 1, 2006 )





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