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A/N: Just a quick poem while I was sitting here thinking about my wife ;)

At times I felt sick and twisted
A thought so pure, yet I missed it

The force of it, of it all, I suppose
While at first it lingers, still it grows

I searched for a purpose, a reason or cause
Looking inward, through my soul it gnaws

I know no better reason, nor a better cause
Than to follow her, without question or pause

Truly the light, the wonder, the inspiration
Who I give myself to, without hesitation

Chrispian H. Burks
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by Chrispian

Awe! I love you too babe. ;)

( Posted by: prissy [Member] On: December 5, 2002 )

a poem from crowe??!
Very nice, Crowe.
It started off good, and just got better as it went along.
Good to see some poetry from you.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: December 5, 2002 )

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