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eternity

union of birth
individualism
union of death

Ivor G Davies



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The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.
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by ivordavies

eternity
never been too sure if our brief little lives being, as they are, between the twin enormities of birth and death were especially sacred or especially futile... I'm still not... Maybe it just is. Made me think, did this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 14, 2006 )

Bit Between
Shannon,

Thanks for the comment, I feel that the most important purpose of 'life' is the little bit between birth and death, sacred or futile could depend on your point of view? (and how much fun you have I suppose)....

Wanda, thanks for letting me know you passed bu,,, appreciated,

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: November 16, 2006 )

The briefest moment
I really liked this, the notion of seperateness as just a flicker.

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: November 18, 2006 )

Trip of a Lifetime
Viper, Lucie,

You are both on my wavelength and seem to have got inside my head on this. yes certainly a 'flicker' in the overall scheme of things. But such an important part of continual existance where individuality adds everything to ongoing 'interconnectedness'...... but I'm not convinced on the 'unconditianally'

Even the human condition progresses from total indivuidalism (hopefully) before we finally move on?

Thanks again for you all joining me on this trip,

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: November 18, 2006 )





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