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Once upon a moon-drenched night
A night so crystalline
Down by the sea
A man knelt before a sepulchral
The sepulchral of his only love
A woman so divine
The only one he had ever loved
The only one he would ever love
His heart filled with sorrow
Feeling so alone
Never again would he walk
this empty path alone
He wanted to be with her
So he ended it
He took his own life
With his last breath he whispered
Never again can they separate us
We’ll be together forever
Just like it was meant to be
Gasping for air one last time
And he was gone…

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