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The heat rises
in shimmering waves
radiating off her body
and the sun
has nothing to do with
the tease of flesh,
the traced hints of sexy magic.
I find myself fixated, wanting
the cool smooth flesh hidden there.
Longing to heat the pale skin,
to give the warmth
of summer kisses
she pours the oil, oh the oil!
What I wouldn't give
for that liquid fantasy
to slip and slide
to come alive,
between glistening fingers
and supple mounds of flesh
I lick my lips
and imagine the possibilities
of summer heat.
I can see her eyes,
carefully veiled behind
shades and poolside humility
as I walk on by,
the urge to turn my head
and stare overwhelms me.
Oh, the strings undone,
tender kissable flesh revealed
in brilliant shades
of cream and gold,
the scent of oil
and sweet desire
I find a soft seat and relax,
I watch her sizzle
slowly, softly, kissed
by the afternoon sun

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The following comments are for "Sunkissed"
by BMartinez

Sun, HOT, kisses
Billy, nice to see you here. Even nicer to see our pieces here. It was fun working on them. Look forward to more writing endeavors. Go on Poet!

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: November 8, 2006 )

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