Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

though this indian summer is all warm winds
and pleasant colored leaves,
to me this rustic land is known
and i am not deceived

Winter she'll float on down
to this my ol' hometown

yeah, she'll float on down

wearing her ivory gown
muffling every living sound
knocking apple branches down
an' biting the tail of every hound

yes, float on down she will:

icing the pigs' swill
embracing dale and hill
painting every landscape white and still

an' the ol' trapper's milk will spill,
for the last time it will

for brutal months we're bound
and though i'd like to skip this town,
i reckon i'll be found
here and there around

when winter she float on down!


------
"Any intelligent fool can make things bigger, more complicated, and more violent. It takes a lot of courage... and a touch of brilliance to move things in the other direction."

- Albert Einstein


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Late Fall in Klamath Falls, Oregon"
by drunkenmonkeymind

Lot of rain there, right?
Very nice imagery of the coming cold, you pessamist! Nicely arranged to feel the pleasentry of fall still holding hopes of warmth-
and actually the visuals of cold, stark winter aren't bad either. Nicely done. Makes me want to see what you'll do with spring!
-Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: November 8, 2006 )

Winter's wiles
love the blues beat and affectionate tone of this. canny poem too, wise to winter's ways. good stuff.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 8, 2006 )

Thanks
Thank you two for the appreciative read. The poem only tries to tell the truth.

( Posted by: drunkenmonkeymind [Member] On: November 12, 2006 )

Late Fall in Klamath
I have to agree with Shannon and Elizabeth
I love the imagery on this. Thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: November 13, 2006 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: