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Through glazed eyes
He sees the future, the minute worlds forming and destroying themselves on her naked body
He exhales smoke, puts out his ciggarette and
lays down beside her
He wraps his sinful arm around the angel whose halo he stole, and places a beautiful dirty kiss on her sleeping lips



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No matter how bad it gets just keep on walking. You'll get there eventually, it may not be what you thought, but at least you will be alive.


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The following comments are for "The Devil's Deed"
by thenightcalls

The Devils Deed
very well done. I like it thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: November 7, 2006 )

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Thankyou,

( Posted by: thenightcalls [Member] On: November 8, 2006 )





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