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Sugar and spice - well,
They just don't mix right for me,
So leave my tea be.


The following comments are for "My try @ Haiku..."
by JerJer15

*snap snap*
haiku is so hard to write. most times it comes out sounding fake. but this has a very beatnik feel to it. groovy. i like it.

( Posted by: nightshade [Member] On: May 22, 2002 )

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