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Lonely tear
Betrays a thousand
As my dam-like emotions
Overflow and breach the walls of reason.
You thought Id
Be your one.
Assuming Id be here
But these private tears
Tell me Ive outgrown you.

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The following comments are for "Growing Pains"
by MattS

Growing Pains
very well done. I like the first three line the best i like it all thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: November 5, 2006 )

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