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(Ice) picked your brain
trying to find out
what you were thinking

Plucked out your eyes
Held them in my palm
Looked into them
Were you seeing me?

Cut out your tongue
held it to my ear
listening for whispered
sweet nothings

Ripped out your heart
Held it still beating
to see if I could find
any trace of love

My fingernails
opened your belly
to see if I could
find your soul

One thing I can say
You sure got guts
Duct taped you up
Only one more thing to do

Tie a ribbon around your manhood
Your gift to womankind
The only part of you shared freely
with any woman you could sweet talk into your bed

Now you are ready, My Darling
to hang with the others
in the basement freezer

Must clean up
take a shower
pretty up
go out again,

Searching for love

Kacee Huggs

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The following comments are for "Searching for Love"
by Nitz Kitty

Oh Kacee I like this. It is every womans thought. I know at one time I wish I could bave my done it myself to my ex. Thanks for this one.

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: November 4, 2006 )

Searching for love
This is a dream I had about a woman serial killer...who is trying to find the perfect mate...since there is no such thing ...she is always disappointed ...and when that's deadly...and she has a huge walk-in freezer in her basement...I guess I've been watching too many Csi shows...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: November 4, 2006 )

searching for love
Spine-chillingly told Kacee, captivating and compelling, the way a good true crime story should be, gothic in its way... but sad too. I feel sorry for this lady and her freezer full of fellas, still looking for love and always disappointed... language in this is spot on, sharp as dissection tools, painted with such clarity I could picture the scene in gory detail. Loved this, very well written indeed.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 4, 2006 )

Thank Wanda, Lucy, and Shannon...
Lucy, I knew you'd find my zinger...pretty gutsy of ya...
Shannon, Sometimes I scare myself...believe me this dream was so real and I was that woman in the dream...very uncharacteristic of me... most of the time I open up the door to let a fly out of my house and I hate was MESSY...
I really didn't know how people were going to take this...I'm glad you three liked it...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: November 4, 2006 )


I found this psycho-thriller (dry humor) quite entertaining. Oh how many of us abused womyn have dreamed these dreams. Our subconcious takes over us at the best and worst of times. Taking us to out of body experiences. This is something I have dreamt.

Much like I felt I wanted to come across in "Kill This Ugly Beast". I have another one that is so gross and gory, I haven't submitted it yet. Waiting on perhaps rewriting it some.

Very good entertainment hun.

Thanks for Sharing this
Dar xo

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: November 4, 2006 )

Thanks for reading and commenting...I guess this must have come from the sub-subconcious ...deep and dark...something I didn't even know was there...Yikes...glad you got a laugh...a comedy horror of sorts...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: November 4, 2006 )

no that's what i call a poem with...oh, i don't know...a prison record? that's some very powerful medicine you're despensing here, ms. kitty.

(great poem!).


( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: November 8, 2006 )

love those men
Just a little weirdness left over from Halloween...and watching tv about serial killers.. majority are men...I just wanted to turn the tables a little...I can't help it...that's the way my mind works...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: November 8, 2006 )

You've just described...
...every woman I ever loved. Such nurturing spirits, they were. How tender their torture. Sweet pain, sweet pain.

( Posted by: DeletedUser [Member] On: November 10, 2006 )

Well, quit aggravating all them women...and when they ask you what you're thinking better come up with something or else you might get your brain picked...
You are making the wrong choices if you keep getting hurt...fall back and regroup...thanks for the comment...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: November 10, 2006 )

It's odd that I seem drawn to this because I am a non-violent person. But with each line, each word, I could see my ex-husband (my daughter's molester), in this situation. Then reality stepped in and I would never see my kids again if I crossed that line. I even held a knife in my hand, more than once, watching and listening to him snore. This poem gave me such satisfaction! It helped me to slightly re-live that moment and pretend I was doing those things to him. It gave me a chill and a thrill! Thanks. PaulaAnne

( Posted by: PaulaAnne [Member] On: December 1, 2006 )

This was a poem about a woman serial killer who was definitely over the edge...This was written in fun because I am a nonviolent person myself...I usually am the peacemaker ...but I love to watch detective and csi shows on tv...I would feel very terrible if someone took what I have written and used it to destroy another human being...that is not my thing I have learned from all this ...IF YOU KILL ...YOU ALWAYS GET CAUGHT...AND IT'S NEVER WORTH SPENDING YOUR WHOLE LIFE IN JAIL...
Better to forgive and go on with your life...thanks for reading and the comment...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: December 1, 2006 )

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