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Your Mind…



Dominating and strong filled with the promise of all things to come and things that have been published before you and interpreted by you in your own way…


The way that you think as power travels as an instinct seeking…
Hunting and endeavoring to bring into existence the nature of all that has happened to you, with you and around you, your evolvement…


Your Mind…


Like many others contemplating the where, when, who, how and why of things…
Solutions, equations systematically adding, dividing and subtracting the sum of things…



Reading and deciding, planning and providing a list of things to go over to do,
To live and become…to surrender to…


Beautiful in essence of art of rhythm and rhyme intriguing me time after time after time and again…


I lose myself comfortably, hopelessly, and immensely you captivate me with,

…Your mind.


By LMJ





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LMJ


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The following comments are for "Your Mind...."
by LMJ

don't lose Your Mind
A mind is truly captivating:
A place where adversarial ideas can exist in harmony
The first light of the revolutionary
and a privilege to carry...

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: November 1, 2006 )

Don't let a mind be lost!
A mind is truly captivating:
A place where adversarial ideas can exist in harmony
The first light of the revolutionary,
and a privilege to carry...

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: November 1, 2006 )

Seeing double?
Hey LMJ:
Sorry about the duplicate comment...the first time I submitted it, it didn't appear on this page, so I re-sent it with a different subject.

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: November 2, 2006 )





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