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Acey Deucey one two three
Yelled the bird up in the tree
As long as possum shags raccoon
All is well with paper moon

Bozo Billy Bob and Sue
The makings of a motley crew
Bellied up to baboon's bar
Drinking honey from a jar

When beaver builds his big balloon
We're all off to Dale's saloon
Till then we'll drink sarsaparilla
With our good friend Mack gorilla

And sing a tune beneath the stars
Of motley crews in baboon bars
And hold on to our silly dreams
Of apple carts and facial creams






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The following comments are for "Silly Dreams"
by JackGrady

Silly Dreams
I like this very well done and thanks.

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: October 30, 2006 )





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