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Whatever you are,

(if you’ve love and good will in your heart,)

i say to You:

we’ve lived too long in Cyborgia
where architects design the wheat,
and distant slave labor shoes each set of feet,
where frowns and scowls shove through the streets,
and workers go to church in “brothels of fake energy”

now, O pioneers, is the time
to launch a crusade of passionate crime
to join the far-flung bohemian band
to be young again
playing amid the cosmic sands,
to open our arms to the harsh and unwashed,
to let whisky fly like a golden dove
to Smilingly paint:


on the canvas of the sky

"Any intelligent fool can make things bigger, more complicated, and more violent. It takes a lot of courage... and a touch of brilliance to move things in the other direction."

- Albert Einstein

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The following comments are for "!!OREGON OR BUST!!"
by drunkenmonkeymind

Busting It Up
I'm with you except for the whiskey (as of the last decade). I prefer my vegetable matter to be less refined.

Especially like "where frowns and scowls shove through the streets".

~ John

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: October 29, 2006 )

"a crusade of passionate crime". an ode to life and living this. a call to arms for the spirit and senses. thank you for this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 30, 2006 )

Thank you Flaunigus and AuldMiseryGuts!! Yeah, I've been feeling a little inspired lately.

happy trails,
Sean L Nelson

( Posted by: drunkenmonkeymind [Member] On: October 30, 2006 )

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