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There's a train
on these tracks,
a train to
catch.

This train is moving
quick.

Forever is what I
seem to take,
when this train
takes me in.

There's a man
on this train,
a man
to meet.

This man is what
I spent.

Forever to find a train
to take,
me back to what
I left.


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The following comments are for "A Train To Catch"
by matt73

A Train To Catch
I like this one. I think we try to catch that train to take us back at times. Thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: October 28, 2006 )

mystery...
who is this man (self) perhaps? this train..does it leave often? where does it go? is it a dream? or is there a search? it all sounds familiar..for some reason. thanks for making me think i like the mystery.














( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: October 29, 2006 )





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