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Soft melodies of joy and hope for the future that float through our subconscious minds...
Visions of what we could possibly be at our best...

Sweet and never ending extensions of what we wish for in this life time...

Branded so deeply within us that they invade us as we sleep, talk and breathe...

Bringing them into existence by word of mouth and the sweat of our brows' they come
true and there we are wishing and hoping once again...

With the same joy and sense of a dream to accomplish what it really means to fulfill

…With a heightened sense of enthusiasm because now we believe.

Warm and cuddle-ly fuzzy and slippery pink and purple elements peering out at us blinking into reality rays of sunshine, yellow and bright, warm and wanting...

In meeting them we meet ourselves face to face...

...Before we choose them openly and hopefully with approval from none here on earth.

Dreams...Can't live with out them.



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The following comments are for "Dreams..."
by LMJ

very well written. No we cant live with our dreams and it is up to us to make them come true. Thanks for this.

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: October 28, 2006 )

yes..we must continue to believe, as long as there is life there is hope! thanks for your comment.

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: October 29, 2006 )

I am sorry I meant to say without our dreams.
Yes we must believe. Without faith then what is the use. Thanks this vefy well written

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: October 29, 2006 )

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