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the dead stars waltz
pilled up and vacant
TV, cannabis, cocaine and god
eyes gone wide
like flying saucers landing
to visit
or carry them home


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by JonnyT

Pie-eyed on sex, drug, rock-n-roll and the opiate of the masses...
...I think you covered all of the 'goodies' with this one except sex. Can't forget the endorphins now, can we?

( Posted by: DeletedUser [Member] On: November 2, 2006 )

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