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This is the city where
I found,
the fixity of

These are the streets
that pace,
famed the course
of imminence.

This is the city where
I lost,
the tangibility
of surface...

...This is the city where
I am to be found,
and found to be

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The following comments are for "This City"
by matt73

tricky tricky tricky
I like the precision of this piece very much. I was reading it over at the other forum, I believe. I like it, and it makes me want to think about it because it sounds good off the tongue. Do you know what I mean? At this time I'm still working out the focus of it - it's just out of my reach. But I like it thus far!


( Posted by: gibsongirl [Member] On: October 28, 2006 )

This City
yup, another tight and tricky poem to put you through your mental paces. enjoying these.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 28, 2006 )

The end sums it up, but it didn't need a summary. A sharp piece of mindful collectiveness carved this one out of the woodworks. I like this, it made my jaw ache.

( Posted by: BAAL [Member] On: October 30, 2006 )

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