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Running with ignorance
and optimism,
fixed to our
whim.

Counting fires
as we swim.

Speeding through endless
choice and chance,
leaving what we made
with what makes sense.

Chasing what will
take us.

Taking what will
shape us...

...This is where we
never were and
where we always
will be.


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The following comments are for "Intangible Continuum"
by matt73

Intangible Continuum
so much intense internal process in this poem... self and consciousness scrutinised minutely in the act of... metamorphosis (?) I could read this again and again and I probably will. got levels this, goes down deep.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 26, 2006 )





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