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The glowing green screen
Sputters, spits a transient
Flatlines, reboots, this
Concludes our broadcast day.

Beware the lollipop of mediocrity-
Lick it once and you suck forever.

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The following comments are for "EKGremlins (E.I.U. intro)"
by metrozol

metrozol, just so you know
for me, confirmed technophobe, this has an eerie and apocalyptic feel... but I liked it

My younger bother, confirmed technophile, has been, bathed in the spooky pale green glow of his monitor, reading your poetry with great interest... and he loves it.

You've got an edge is what you've got.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 26, 2006 )

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